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大作文題目：
Although family has a great influence on children’s life, it is the influence of outside the home that plays a bigger part in their development.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】教育類
【題目解析】
這是一道觀點(diǎn)類題型，其大意是：雖然家庭對(duì)孩子的生活有很大的影響，但是外面的世界對(duì)他們的影響會(huì)更大。從何種程度上同意或不同意。
這個(gè)題目的的論證核心是“外面的世界對(duì)他們的影響會(huì)更大”，故觀點(diǎn)可以是：
1）完全贊同外面的世界比家庭對(duì)孩子的影響會(huì)更大；
2）完整不贊同外面的世界比家庭對(duì)孩子的影響會(huì)更大；
3）家庭和外面的世界對(duì)孩子的影響一樣大；
筆者選擇的是“完全贊同”。

【寫(xiě)作思路】
開(kāi)頭段：題目改寫(xiě)+個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)；
Body 1：外面的世界對(duì)孩子的智力發(fā)展比家庭影響更大；
Body 2：外面的世界對(duì)孩子的社交技能和交流技能的影響比家庭更大；
結(jié)尾段：重申個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)+總結(jié)主體段兩個(gè)理由。

【參考范文】
It is argued that children are more likely to be impacted by the outside world compared with the influence from their family. Personally, I totally concur with this statement because the academic knowledge and social skills they can acquire from the wider community are more significant to their life-time development than what is provided at home.

The primary reason supporting my stance is that regarding children’s intellectual development, teachers play a more crucial role than parents do. Teachers are known to have to ability to impart knowledge to children of different subjects. In math classes, for example, students are taught algebra and functions, which exercise children’s logical thinking. Similarly, taking history classes allows children to analyse the causes and effects of historical events, helping them improve their analytical skills and critical-thinking ability. These skills are significant in children’s continuous education and future employment. The majority of parents, however, are not able to do so as they are not experts in such areas, thereby being less influential on children’s further advancement.

Another important point I consider is that social skills and collaborative skills, which facilitate children’s future development can, to a larger extent, be cultivated via socialising with peers at school or participating in various activities rather than the interaction with parents. On campus, children may have conflict with their schoolmates, but will gradually understand and learn the way to get along with others if some of their behaviour prevents them from making friends. Meanwhile, there are many activities requiring cooperation, through which children can have an appreciation of teamwork. In contrast, family members shower children with endless love, seldom requiring them to share what they have and always helping them to do everything possible, which is of no benefit to children’s development.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that the world outside home weighs more than parents in children’s development. After all, the important factors in children’s growth, including intellectual development, social skills and collaborative skills can mostly be nurtured beyond a family setting.
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【詞匯短語(yǔ)積累】
1.academic knowledge 學(xué)術(shù)知識(shí)
2.social skills 社交技能
3.acquire (v.) 獲得
4.the wider community 社會(huì)
5.life-time (adj.) 一生的
6.intellectual (adj.) 智力的
7.impart knowledge 灌輸知識(shí)
8.algebra (n.) 代數(shù)
9.function (n.) 函數(shù)
10.exercise one’s logical thinking 鍛煉某人的邏輯思維
11.analytical skills 分析能力
12.critical-thinking ability 思辨能力
13.continuous education 繼續(xù)教育
14.influential (adj.) 有影響力的
15.collaborative skills 合作技能
16.facilitate (v.) 促進(jìn)
17.socialise (v.) 與…社交
18.peer (n.) 同齡人
19.interaction (n.) 互動(dòng)
20.have conflict with 與…發(fā)生矛盾
21.schoolmate (n.) 校友
22.get along with 與…相處
23.cooperation (n.) 合作
24.have an appreciation 對(duì)…有理解
25.teamwork (n.) 團(tuán)隊(duì)合作
26.shower sb. with 給予某人…
27.nurture (v.) 培養(yǎng)
28.a family setting 家庭環(huán)境

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