雅思寫作當中會遇到很多關于我們生活當中的一些話題，需要烤鴨根據自己生活當中的經歷，提出一些解決的辦法或者針對這類問題的看法，本期我們給大家從網上分享一下關于能源開發的問題，就是說是否應該去偏遠地區開發能源。

本期題目

With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas? 

范文

The shortage of energy such as oil and gas has become one of the most urgent problems in modern world. To solve the problem, many suggest that we go to the remote and untouched places for more sources of energy. To my mind, however, this is a suggestion that may produce mixed results.

Looking for new energy in uninhabited areas is a very attractive idea. Such places always abound with energy desperately needed by human race, thus attracting generations of people to take their chances. Besides, the exploration of energy in these areas has little immediate impact on the everyday life of people since it happens far away from where they live.

But doing so may have a lot of problems as well. To start with, it would involve tremendous costs to find energy in these places. People will have to build houses, and roads to transport food and other daily necessities, all of which will be so expensive that the costs may far exceed the benefits. More importantly, looking for energy in the remote areas will almost certainly damage their natural environment. As plants and animals die out, the whole ecosystem will be upset, the long-term effect of which would be devastating.

In my personal opinion, therefore, people should not be encouraged to invade the unpopulated areas in order to protect themselves from the energy crisis, for the aftermaths would be unbearable. To solve the energy problem, people should first of all learn to save energy whenever possible, and then develop alternative energy sources such as solar energy and water energy.

語料整理

urgent  緊迫的；急迫的

to my mind  在我看來；我認為

mixed results  好壞參半的結果

uninhabited  無人居住的

abound with  富含......

desperately  極端地

involve  涉及；包含

tremendous  巨大的

exceed  超過

ecosystem  生態系統

upset  擾亂

long-term effect  長遠的效果

devastating  摧毀性的

unpopulated  無人居住的

aftermath  （不好的）后果

alternative  替換的

以上就是我們本期給大家介紹的雅思寫作高分范文，希望對備考雅思的同學們有所幫助！另外如果大家在備考雅思的過程當中有任何疑問，都可以在線給我們老師留言咨詢，通過高分范文案例的寫作思路，給大家提供一些答題的技巧和方法。